PLEASE MAKE THE FOLLOWING CORRECTIONS TO MY WORK.
Did you read my track changes last time I sent it back?
The research design section that has all those headings I listed (which are also on the marksheet ) should be HOW you did it from a design perspective – it should use authors such as Siverman (key text) Cresswell and all the other qualitative authors that support that methods of the choice of ethnography as a methodology –
So for example – you should be saying under philosophy – that you are using a interpretive paradigm. According to Silverman (2016) ‘an interpretive design means ‘ quote ….’ (p).
This allows for an emergent design where themes emerge from the data …etc
You need to do this for every heading –
Smith (yr) suggests that observation is a key methods for ethnography …..
I used semi structured interviews that allows for the participants voice in the research (pat 2018)
According to Silverman (2016) ethnographic design allows ………etc
Please can you look at what you have done and amend – the research design section is what you did and the choices of design you made NOT any findings of what you found this is in the critical analysis
You did not includes any raw data – coding ?